And still continuing

How lost that I am

here in this beautiful mess;

I live here with you.

OK this is the 5-7-5 which I wrote and like best.But some of the time when a poem is translated from Japanese to English the syllables didn't carry over exactly the way it was meant to sound so you get more syllables then originally planned.

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